Hello people!!
This time I would like you to write about a sport you like or about a trip you have taken.
Please include the introduction, body and conclusion, so the essay will have three paragraphs.
Do not digress. Stick to the point. If you are talking about basketball, do not finish mentioning things about soccer!
You can start your essay with a question or a comparison. Do I like golf? Some people love golf, not me... State clearly what you are going to write about: I will write about golf and the reasons why I like it.
The second paragraph is the body, you should give examples about the sport you've chosen or the trip.
The conclusion can be defined by: In conclusion, considering all what I said before...
This essay is due on October 18th.
Take care!!
Your short teacher.
Do you like tennis? A lot of women prefer handball as the best sport, not me. I'd rather play and watch tennis. Here I'll tell you why.
ReplyDeleteTennis must be one of the most complete sports ever. It is true that you grab the racket with your hands. However, you also need strong legs and fast movements to hit the ball. A tennis match can last up to three hours or more sometimes, so you should be in a good shape, too.
Moreover,a tennis player usually finds some strategies to beat his or her opponent, therefore concentration is a big part of this exciting game.
Considering all what I said before, tennis is complete, dynamic and keeps you in a good shape. I've been playing tennis for a year now and it's been great. You must try it!
One of the sports that I like the most it's football, as a lot of people around the globe. But just for watch it not for play it. I’d rather watch UK football, and here are the reasons why.
ReplyDeleteFootball (specially the British one for me) has action and always something unexpected that can totally surprise you. The match that I always like to watch is the North London Derby: Arsenal vs. Tottenham (Premier League), that’d be equal to: Olimpia vs. Cerro Porteño here.
However, it’s a tough sport; therefore every single player should be in good shape and be fast and show their abilities in field to make of the “90 minutes” something unforgettable and full of excitement.
Considering all what I said before, football is great, because it has everything that someone can ask for, that's the reason why is the most played sport in the world.
Excellent Rafa! You didn't digress at all!
DeleteAnd British is your thing ;)
Take care!!
Thanks teacher! To have the both accents, I worked really hard! Thanks God that dream definitely came true! I'll miss ya to much, massive thank you for everything you taught me/us! Have fun in Europe
DeleteI will write about a trip I'd taken.
ReplyDeleteThree years ago, On vacations, I travel to Belgium with all my family, was the best summer ever. I was very nervous because it was my first travel by an airplane.
It was the longest and tiring trip ever, it lasted approximately 22 hours.
Finaly, we arrived to Belgium airport and we moved to the hotel.
We visited many beautiful places and also I met new people, In this country the people are very different, I mean, they make you feel like you're at home.
I learned the language they use, the nederland.
Also, I met Eurodisney, Is the biggest and most beautiful park I ever saw.
In conclusion, I enjoyed the trip too much because I met new places that I had never seen before.
Amazing Rosa!! The tenses are well used.
DeleteIn the last paragraph, pay attention when you start a new statement: It is the biggest...
Good job this time!!
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ReplyDeleteDo you know about basketball? Although most men prefer soccer, there is also a huge amount of men who would rather spend their free time playing basketball instead of any other sport.
ReplyDeleteI'm between that amount of men who prefer basketball, in fact, I used to play at the Autónoma of Asunción University (where I'm studying at right now) when I was about nine or ten. I played there for two years then I stopped and now when I see the practices during recess I can't stop that "regret" feeling. I would be so tall now. And it was so much fun, I remember ending up really tired. Sadly, now I don't have the time or the skills anymore to practice again.
In conclusion, basketball it's my favorite sport. If I could I would totally do it again and if you never had done it, you should try at least once.
You wish you were taller, like me uh?.. Well done Yasser.
DeleteGo ahead, practice again if you can!! ;)
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ReplyDeleteI will talk about my favorite sport that is an equestrian sport usually call horseback riding, it is not a common sport but a lot of people like to watch it I consider it’s a good way to get entertainment, now I’ll tell you why
ReplyDeleteI used to be afraid of horses, but then I realized that they are the most beautiful and noble animals that could ever exist, they are loyal and when they know you well, they could definitely recognize you. all this I learned when I started practice this sport.
Other reason it’s because I don’t like running and for this you don’t need to run that I think is why this is the perfect sport for me but in the other hand you also need to be in shape because at the end of every practice you would be exhausted.
According to what I said before I consider myself a horse lover and this sport one of the most amazing thing I’ve ever done and I wish I could practice again.
Excellent essay! Is this the one that you used for your school too?
DeleteGood job!!
No it is not teacher, this is a new one! Thanks
DeleteI'm gonna write about my trip to the United States.
ReplyDeleteIt was my first travel alone by plane , I was very nervous but then I was so proud of me because I was making it.
When we landed in the airport , there was my cousin and her boyfriend waiting for me. I cried so much because they were living there for 4 years so I really missed them.
We went to her apartment for leave my bags , and then the fun started! we went to libraries , to shop clothes and shoes , and to visit really interesting museums . We went to Times Square , and then we took the ferry to go and see the Statue of Liberty. I almost die when I saw the Brooklyn Bridge
As a conclusion , it was the best trip ever and I really enjoy it! It's so beautiful there , and being there it was a dream to me.♥
Is this true? If it's not, it can become true!!
DeleteI'd like you to make your introduction a bit longer, then it'd be perfect!!
Thanks for the cake!! It was so delicious!!
Many people like soccer me too, the soccer is one of the most sports to have practice in the world, my favorite team in the world is Olimpia of Paraguay.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was a child I was practice soccer but I couldn't see the fruit in me that is the reason that I only see the soccer now, I always see the game when my team play, I also see the premier league and league BBVA from Spain.
For me soccer is the best sport in the world the best thing is when you travel to another contry to see your team if you have the opportunity, I was travel in june to see Olimpia in the final of the Libertadores it was a good experience for me but we really pass very bad there, the soccer have two parts now the best part is: the fanaticism, and the worst is : the violence which is a problem in soccer today.
Good Renato! Practice writing essays.
DeleteCorrect the past: I was practice = I practiced!!
I want my gloves.
I will write about Disney, the best travel i ever had. A lot of women prefer fifteen party for her fifteen brithday, not me. Here i'll tell you why.
ReplyDeleteDisneyworld is the most visited attraction in the world, has the best parks either thematic or aquatic. Magic Kingdom is the original theme park on the complex, who not dream to be there one time in their life? All the movies we saw in our childhood or toys we has it is related to the park.
It is true that you can travel at other moment not jus for your fifteen but the experiencie, the emotion, the feeling can not compare with anything.
Considering all what I said before, Disney is one of the most amazing places. I had travel there two years ago and i never forgot it and always want to go again.
That's Ruth's Essay
DeleteI've never been to Disney. I'd like to, though.
DeleteGood job Ruth!!
Do you like swimming? A lot of people prefer football or handball, but not me. I'd swimming in the summer and then I'll tell you why I like swimming.
ReplyDeleteSwimming must be one of the most complete sports ever. Why it is considered one of the best sports? Because swimming helps to move the whole body and helps you to develop more quickly and strength.
However, you need strong legs and arms to swim fastly.
In a swimming competition you have to be quickly and you have to know how to work on a team.
Moreover, in a swimming competition you have to have a lot of concentration.
Considering all what I said before, swimming is a complete sport. Swimming keeps you in a good shape. I've swimming in the summer and it's always great. I know that you are always swimming and I know that you like it! :')
Greetings !!!
Wonderful Fabi!!
DeletePay attention to "swim fast" and I've swum!
Keep singing ;)
Soccer.
ReplyDeleteThe magic of soccer is so big that makes it the most famous sport around the world, for many it is just a sport or a business but for me soccer means “passion and fair-play”, would you like to know why?…
Soccer is a sport in which you have to be smart, fast and thoughtful; you just can’t get into the field and lose the concentration. When the ball starts rolling, you just hear the support of the fans, the coach’s indications and the whistle of the referee; is up to you and your mates to win the match. Even though the game gets harder, you have to remember that the team you’re playing against is just your opponent for 90 minutes, and not your enemy, therefore if somebody gets injured you must help him; it is part of the fair-play.
In conclusion, soccer is a fantastic game that you can play as an amateur or a professional, but also you’ve got to remember that the net is your target and your opponents deserve a little respect.
Have a nice weekend…
Excellent Rodrigo! You write pretty well!!
DeleteTake care!!
Say hi to the Pope!
Do you like volleyball? Many girls like handball as the best sport, well this is not my case, I think volleyball is the best sport for everyone. Here is the reason why.
ReplyDeleteFirst, I think volleyball is the best sport because it’s competitive. It’s competitive because the goal is to win the game. There are three rounds in a volleyball game. You try to win all three, you want to get 25 points before the other team does. Second, there are many rules you have to follow. The rules make the game much more competitive. Finally in volleyball you have to make quick decisions if you don’t you lose.
I really love to play volleyball with my team, I think comunication is very important in a team, for example in a game, you say things like ‘‘Mine’’, ‘‘I got it’’, ‘‘Me’’, and your team will know that you are the one who is going to get the ball, and that is the only way to win.
In conclusion I really enjoy to play volleyball, my life would be perfect if I could play it every single day.
Larissa
Amazing Larissa! Keep playing volleyball!!
DeleteLove ya! =)
ROWING
ReplyDeleteIt is called a rowing to the set of sports fields which consist in the propulsion of a ship in the water with or without a helmsman, by muscular force of one or paddle boys several, using one or two oars as levers, simple of second grade, sitting back in the direction of movement.
In a rowing boat all the elements portantes must be fixed to the body of the ship, only the car where they are granted the oarsman can move. This gives rise to a classification according to whether the car is mobile or not. We have then mobile bank's paddle and the bank fixed.
In conclution, I like the rowing because it works many muscles of the body, as the biceps, triceps, trapezes, femorales, abdomen and others. It's a sport that brings much well-being the body.
Alaaaan! Good job!! Although the first part is copy-pasted, I like the conclusion.
ReplyDeleteKeep practicing and study more!!